Watching the Animatic

We just watched the most recent version of the animatic.

Here are some notes that I've been taken:

• I think there might be some pacing issues in the middle before the fish gets put on the table in the restaurant.
• Everything's really close to the characters in the restaurant.
• I agree with Rach on the transition to the restaurant.
• There's something missing an I can't quite put my finger on it yet.
• It might be that his anxiety is a bit lost in the visuals.
• The Opening restaurant shot is too quick. You don't get much of a read of a character
• Betty takin Pavo's chair looks like a weird move to make now.
• Perspective fixes
• The waiter is an asshole immediately, scene need swap round.
• Some emotional beats don't real well.
• Weird Consistency
• I think the part between Pavo getting out of the bath and Pavo getting to the resteraunt needs an extra scene to establish that the water is a manifestation an/or show Pavo is going on a date.
• Slow zooms cause dear air at the end.
• End shot of Pavo marching through the water should be a wide and show him fighting against the water.
• Cut fish at the end