Storyboard review Meeting Review

Here are my notes for the review:

Shorten Scene 1,

Water comes out of EVERYTHING

We see Pavo's face more

Pad opening Scene 2

Linger on Pavo's Face

Establishing shot of Pavo preparing for company

Establishing shot of Betty entering and walking towards Pavo

More Spins on Betty (Two or three)

Perspective fixing

Waiter Scene 2

Swap some scenes around

Make the waiter have progression with his bastardness

Fish finger 3

No dolly zoom out

Add surreal hand shot from hand hold scene

Napkin scence

Restaurant Bathroom

Window now in shot,  Pavo smacks into the window and then is pushed into the bathroom.

Water smacks into the camera.

Water opaque

Rejig the entire scene.

Water return

Pavo fights against the water in a wide shot, for a longer period of time. He now slides into the booth.

End Shots

Toothbrush colours of character

Credits

Water cascade of sets

Everytime something bad happens to Pavo water trinkles in the background.