The class bringing Ideas to the table

 On Friday 5th we presented the first official draft of what we had to the class. The class responded to it well. So now as a class we went through the script beats and we started breaking them down. This was what was written:

This discussion would prompt another writers meeting to be held on Sunday 7th as we definitely needed to work on it to be strong enough for the treatment. Also we needed to write more about the characters as we mainly focused on the visuals rather than the deeper story.